hmm. great color palette. good. typography consistent (you found a new favorite?), but the way you've placed all is different here than the way you've placed all other ascenders. sticks out for me. whadya think? move it over so that the ascenders go above the baseline of "for" and it still rests on humanity? try it as a version. let's see. xox. g
hmm. great color palette. good. typography consistent (you found a new favorite?), but the way you've placed all is different here than the way you've placed all other ascenders. sticks out for me. whadya think? move it over so that the ascenders go above the baseline of "for" and it still rests on humanity? try it as a version. let's see. xox. g
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